BEFORE my rewrite:
This client did not have an existing ad and wanted us to write
one from scratch.
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AFTER my rewrite:
Send me your ad now... I am looking for good opportunities...
Wouldn't it be great if you could just send your offers to people who respond like that?
You bet it would!
Imagine sending your ad to people who...
- Actually OPEN and READ their emails
- Paid to join the list and receive email
- Are always seeking new products, services and
opportunities.
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Okay, I'm convinced already... what's the bottom line. What will it cost me to send my
offer out to these super- responsive people?
Now we get to the best part...
I'm not going to ask you to pay $100.00. I'm not even going to ask you to pay $50.00 or
even $25.00.
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per solo ad.
This is an outstanding offer... Don't miss it.
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Rostislav Roytman
Your Success Coach
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