BEFORE my rewrite:
Client did not have an existing ad and wanted us to write one
from scratch.
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AFTER my rewrite:
How to QUIT Smoking in 10 Days or Less and Feel More Alive!
If you are a smoker like me then you know how hard
it is to kick the habit.
Sure, we make half-hearted attempts to give up those nasty coffin nails but we soon slip
back into our normal routines and all our hard effort is blown away with one puff...
It's extremely frustrating, isn't it. We know these things are bad for us, but how do we
deal with this problem in a way that is not going to result in us climbing the walls or
eating the fruit of the calendar.
Well, here's some GREAT news...
There is a solution that works and it's called...
Quit for Sure™
http://www.quitforsure.com/
This program is unique. It uses herbs and herbal extracts that fight addiction without
nicotine, chemicals or nasty side effects.
Quit for Sure™ utilizes a proprietary blend of 48 potent
herbs and essential oils which combat most withdrawal symptoms caused by smoking
cessation, and they also work to detoxify the blood, curb your appetite, enhance your
concentration, energy levels, and stamina, provide nutrients, vitamins, enzymes and fight
non-pathological stress and anxiety.
http://www.quitforsure.com/
Wouldn't you like to feel healthier, have a more alert
mind, feel better about yourself, feel more in control
of your life, feel more alive?
Of course you would...
We all want to feel this way.
You can start feeling this way in 10 Days or Less. The
decision is yours.
Choose life today! Choose Quit for Sure™ now...
http://www.quitforsure.com/
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